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Author Topic:  Daimonin Saga 6  (Read 3874 times)

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Killest_is_awesome

« on: 07, May 2012, 00:19:10 »
CHAPTER ONE: THE MESSAGE
   IT HAS BEEN 2 YEARS SINCE THE FALL OF SATAN, BUT MOROCH STILL THRIVES AND IS PLANNING AN ATTACK ON GG86. BUT BEFORE MOROCH EVEN HAD A CHANCE TO DO SO, A CLAN OF EVIL SPACE FREAKS DECIDED TO DROP IN AND TAKE OVER GG86. LITTLE DID MOROCH KNOW THAT THEY WERE LOOKING FOR NOUVA AND WEAVER, TWO GG86 OUTLAWS THAT HAVE COME FROM PLANET MOSTUJO.
   MEANWHILE, IN KILLOS 101, KILLOS HAS DECIDED TO TAKE A VACATION TO OTHERWORLD. LITTLE DID ANYBODY KNOW THAT GG86 WAS IN DANGER, SOMETHING STRUCK. A METEOR HAD CRASHED IN THE FOREST OF MADNESS WHERE _PERSON_ HAD FOUGHT SOLZHIA AND WHERE TERESIAS HAD ATTEMPTED TO KILL SATAN BUT FAILED. THE METEOR HAD CRACKED OPEN. A MYSTERIOUS BEING THAT GLOWED BRIGHT BLUE WITH SPIKES ON ITS HEAD HAD EMERGED FROM THE METEOR.
   AS THE CREATURE VENTURED THROUGH THE FOREST, IT DISCOVERED A PORTAL. THE CREATURE TRIPPED OVER A STONE AND FLEW HEAD-FIRST INTO THE PORTAL AND, AT THE SAME TIME, TELEPORTED TO A SMALL ISLAND IN THE MIDDLE OF THE GIGANTIC RIVER THAT LIES EAST OF STONEHAVEN'S EASTERN WALL.
   A FESTIVAL WAS BEING HELD IN GUILD HALL THAT CELEBRATED THE DEATH OF VIRISO BACK WHEN KILLEST HAD FOUGHT HIM. BUT THE CITIZENS OF GUILD HALL ONLY REMEMBERED THE RUMOR OF TERESIAS DEFEATING VIRISO SO IT WAS KIND OF A WASTE OF TIME.
   MEANWHILE IN STONEGLOW, KILLEST RECIEVES A MESSAGE IS HIS MAILBOX IN THE STONEGLOW POST OFFICE. IT HAD SEEMED TO BE A LETTER FROM ARORAH.
   KILLEST, I HAVE BEEN CAPTURED BY TWO MOSTUJO OUTLAWS, HELP ME PLEASE! KILLOS IS ON VACATION, AND I DON'T KNOW WHERE I AM! HELP!!!   KILLEST KNEW SOMETHING WAS UP. ARORAH NEVER SEEMED TO BE ALLOWED OUT OF THE STONEHAVEN PALACE TO KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT PLANET MOSTUJO OR EVEN KILLOS. KILLEST SEARCHED THE NOTE FOR CLUES. ON THE BACK OF THE LETTER WAS A PAPER BOOKLET.
   YOU, THE READER, HAVE STUMBLED UPON THE STORY OF JULSAH. MYSTIC RUMORS OF A FUTURE HALF-DEMON WARRIOR HAS BEEN RELEASED FOR SOLVING. IF YOU, THE READER, HAVE DISCOVERED THIS MESSAGE, SEND IT TO OTHERWORLD IMMEDIATELY TO THE ADDRESS OF 449.223.898 TO UNCOVER THR TRUTH OF THE STORY OF JULSAH...
   KILLEST WAS SHOCKED TO SEE THAT THERE WILL BE ANOTHER HERO IN THE FUTURE WHO WILL FOLLOW IN KILLEST'S FOOTSTEPS.
   MEANWHILE IN STONEHAVEN, THE STRANGE CREATURE HAS VENTURED INTO THE STONEHAVEN PALACE AND DISCOVERED A YOUNG GIRL LYING DEAD ON THE FLOOR OF THE ROYAL KITCHENS. THE CREATURE THOUGHT TO ITSELF, WHAT COULD HAVE CAUSED THIS? KING SIGMAR BUSTED THROUGH THE DOORS OF THE ROYAL KITCHENS TO FIND THAT HIS DAUGHTER, ARORAH, WAS LYING DEAD ON THE FLOOR. HE SHOOK HIS FIST AT THE STRANGE CREATURE AS IT BOWED DOWN TO KING SIGMAR. KING SIGMAR HADN'T SEEN THE SPIKES ON THE CREATURE UNTIL IT HAD BOWED DOWN. SIGMAR SAID TO THE CREATURE, OH DEAR, ARE MY EYES DECIEVING ME, IT'S MESA LOV FROM THE LIGHT DIMMENSION! THE CREATURE LOOKED UP AND SAW THAT KILLEST HAD APPEARED BEHIND KING SIGMAR WITH A SUPRISED LOOK ON HIS FACE. AS KILLEST WALKED INTO THE ROYAL KITCHENS TO SEE THAT ARORAH HAD BEEN KILLED, A WATERFALL OF TEARS APPEARED FROM KILLEST'S EYES. KILLEST WAS VERY SAD AND DISAPPOINTED TO SEE THAT ARORAH HAD DIED. KILLEST SAYS TO KING SIGMAR, WHAT HAPPENED HERE!? SIGMAR REPLIED, I HAVE NO IDEA! MESA LOV STOOD UP AND READ KILLEST'S MIND, AND HE SAID TO KILLEST AND KING SIGMAR, GENTLEMEN, YOU HAVE BEEN SET UP... MESA LOV PICKED UP ARORAH'S BODY AND IT HAD SEEMED TO BE MADE OF PILLOW FEATHERS. KILLEST SHOUTED, ITS A TRAP!!! KILLEST RAN OUT OF THE PALACE AND TELEPORTED TO KILLOS 101. HE THEN RAN TO THE GATEWAY TO GG86.
« Last Edit: 07, May 2012, 04:55:51 by Killest_is_awesome »

Wariotx

« Reply #1 on: 07, May 2012, 00:39:39 »
really funny  :laugh:
specially like "A CLAN OF EVIL SPACE FREAKS DECIDED TO DROP IN AND TAKE OVER GG86" and also "KILLEST SHOUTED, ITS A TRAP!!!"

Killest_is_awesome

« Reply #2 on: 07, May 2012, 02:27:24 »
CHAPTER TWO: CHAOS UMUCK
   KILLEST HAD ARRIVED IN GG86 TO FIND THAT THE WHOLE CITY WAS ON FIRE AND THERE WAS NO CITIZEN IN SIGHT... JUST FLAMES. A SHEET OF PAPER HAD FLEW ACROSS THE AIR, LANDED OVER KILLEST'S FACE. THE PAPER HAD A NOTE ON IT.
   WANTED: THE CHAOS BROTHERS. THESE TWO OUTLAWS HAVE TRIGGERED AN INVASION UPON THE CITY OF GG86. THEY CLAIM TO HAVE PLANNED TO INVADE KILLOS 101 AS THEIR NEXT TARGET. IF ANYBODY IS READING THIS THEN HEAD TO KILLOS 101 FOR THE EVACUATION CEREMONY. SIGNED ANCHOR MASON VILHUIZ.
   KILLEST THOUGHT TO HIMSELF, OBVIOUSLY THIS MASON VILHUIZ IS A FRAUD. GG86 AND KILLOS 101 SHARE A NEWS ANCHOR WHOSE NAME IS GARRIET JHIN AND I HAVE NEVER IN MY LIFE HEARD OF THE NAME MASON VILHUIZ.
   MEANWHILE IN STONEHAVEN, KING SIGMAR HAS FAINTED AND MESA LOV HAS VENTURED TO THE ANCIENT CATACOMBS BENEATH THE STONEHAVEN PALACE. THE SECRET LIBRARY IN THE MAIN HALL HAS BEEN EMPTIED. MESA LOV TRAVELED FURTHER THROUGH THE CATACOMBS AND FOUND ARORAH SITTING IN A DARK CORNER LOOKING LIKE SHE HAD 5 BAD HAIR DAYS WITHIN ONE DAY. ARORAH LOOKED UP AT MESA LOV AND SMILED IN RELIEF. ARORAH TRIED TO GET AS LITTLE VOICE OUT AS SHE COULD, T...TH...THANK GOODNESS IT'S YOU! MESA LOV RESPONDS, WHAT WERE YOU DOING DOWN HERE, PRINCESS ARORAH? ARORAH'S SMILE CHANGED TO A SUPRISED FACE BECAUSE NOBODY HAD LABELED HER AS A PRINCESS SINCE SHE WAS 5 YEARS OLD. ARORAH AVOIDS ANSWERING MESA LOV'S QUESTION AND ASKS, WHERE IS KILLEST? MESA LOV SHOOK HIS HEAD AND REPLIED. KILLEST CLAIMED THAT HE HAD RECIEVED A FAKE LETTER FROM YOU SAYING THAT YOU WERE BEING HELD CAPTIVE BY NOUVA AND WEAVER. ARORAH REPLIED, WHO ARE THOSE GUYS? MESA LOV REPLIES, EXACTLY. ARORAH REPLIES, WHAT DOES THAT MEAN? MESA LOV WENT ON, IT MEANS THAT HE KNEW THAT YOU ARE NEVER ALLOWED TO LEAVE STONEHAVEN, LET ALONE LEAVE THE PALACE, AND HE WENT STRAIGHT TO GG86 TO FIND OUT WHO SENT THE LETTER. ARORAH MAKES A THINKING FACE AND ANSWERS MESA LOV'S EARLIER QUESTION, IF YOU WANT TO KNOW WHAT I HAVE BEEN DOING DOWN HERE, I HAVE BEEN LOOKING THROUGH THE SECRET ARCHIVES TO FIND INFORMATION ABOUT WHAT THE OGRES IN THE CLOUD MOUNTAINS HAVE BEEN TALKING ABOUT LATELY. THEY SAY THERES A VILLAINOUS KID WAITING TO UPRISE FROM HELL CALLED THE DEVIL KID. MESA LOV IS SHOCKED TO FIND OUT SUCH STUNNING INFORMATION AND HE SENDS A TELEPATHIC MESSAGE TO KILLEST, KILLEST, I HAVE FOUND ARORAH, YOU NEED TO GO TO THE STONEHAVEN PALACE IMMEDIATELY!   KILLEST RECIEVES MESA LOV'S MESSAGE AND HAS ALREADY STARTED RUNNING TOWARDS THE KILLOS 101 GATEWAY. KILLEST MAKES IT TO THE PALACE WITHIN 30 MINUTES. MESA LOV IS EXITING THE CATACOMBS WITH ARORAH BY HIS SIDE. AFTER KILLEST SEES THEM EMERGE, HE HEARS A SOUND AS IF SOMEBODY WAS ROBBING THE PALACE'S LIBRARY. KILLEST RUNS INTO THE LIBRARY AND FINDS NOUVA AND WEAVER STEALING BOOKS. WITH NOUVA AND WEAVER STILL CONCENTRATED ON BOOKS, KILLEST RUNS UP AND DROP KICKS THE TWO SPASTIC SPACE FREAKS AND THEY ARE WITHOUT CONTROL OF THEIR BODIES. KILLEST YELLS IN THEIR FACES, WTF DO YOU THINK YOU FREAKS ARE DOING!? AS NOUVA AND WEAVER DIDN'T NOTICE THAT ARORAH WAS STANDING BEHIND THEM, SHE KICKS THEM BOTH IN THE HEAD. THEY ARE OUT COLD AND CAN'T REGAIN VISION. OUT OF NOWHERE APPEARS LIPPER BEHIND ARORAH, KILLEST SHOOTS A MAGIC BULLET AT HIM AND HE FALLS BACKWARDS. IT TOOK A FEW SECONDS, BUT WHEN ARORAH REALIZED THAT KILLEST HAD SAVED HER LIFE ONCE AGAIN FOR THE THOUSANDTH TIME, SHE RUNS OVER AND BEGINS TO KISS KILLEST ON THE MOUTH. KILLEST THINKS TO HIMSELF, CALM DOWN, ITS NOT THE FIRST TIME, BABE.
« Last Edit: 07, May 2012, 04:56:10 by Killest_is_awesome »

_people_

« Reply #3 on: 07, May 2012, 04:19:04 »
PLEASE DON'T CAPITALIZE THE FULL STORY. PROPER CAPITALIZATION EXISTS FOR A REASON. IT'S EASIER TO READ THAT WAY AND IT DOESN'T LOOK LIKE EVERYONE'S SHOUTING EVERYTHING.
-- _people_ :)

Killest_is_awesome

« Reply #4 on: 07, May 2012, 04:52:53 »
PLEASE DON'T CAPITALIZE THE FULL STORY. PROPER CAPITALIZATION EXISTS FOR A REASON. IT'S EASIER TO READ THAT WAY AND IT DOESN'T LOOK LIKE EVERYONE'S SHOUTING EVERYTHING.

I'll have to rewrite everything. besides, big letters never broke somebody's leg.

this is the way it was when i wrote it wordpad and it can't be changed unless i rewrite it

Or what if I lower the font size to 8pt?
« Last Edit: 07, May 2012, 04:56:41 by Killest_is_awesome »

_people_

« Reply #5 on: 07, May 2012, 04:58:15 »
I'll have to rewrite everything. besides, big letters never broke somebody's leg.

this is the way it was when i wrote it wordpad and it can't be changed unless i rewrite it

Or what if I lower the font size to 8pt?

So much logic in one post!!

Now here's your first post properly-cased except names and places. Took me all of 2 minutes to figure out how to fix it. Maybe another 2 minutes to read through and capitalize names. Was this so hard?

Quote
It has been 2 years since the fall of satan, but moroch still thrives and is planning an attack on gg86. But before moroch even had a chance to do so, a clan of evil space freaks decided to drop in and take over gg86. Little did moroch know that they were looking for nouva and weaver, two gg86 outlaws that have come from planet mostujo. meanwhile, in killos 101, killos has decided to take a vacation to otherworld. Little did anybody know that gg86 was in danger, something struck. A meteor had crashed in the forest of madness where _person_ had fought solzhia and where teresias had attempted to kill satan but failed. The meteor had cracked open. A mysterious being that glowed bright blue with spikes on its head had emerged from the meteor. as the creature ventured through the forest, it discovered a portal. The creature tripped over a stone and flew head-first into the portal and, at the same time, teleported to a small island in the middle of the gigantic river that lies east of stonehaven's eastern wall. a festival was being held in guild hall that celebrated the death of viriso back when killest had fought him. But the citizens of guild hall only remembered the rumor of teresias defeating viriso so it was kind of a waste of time. meanwhile in stoneglow, killest recieves a message is his mailbox in the stoneglow post office. It had seemed to be a letter from arorah. killest, i have been captured by two mostujo outlaws, help me please! Killos is on vacation, and i don't know where i am! Help!!! Killest knew something was up. Arorah never seemed to be allowed out of the stonehaven palace to know anything about planet mostujo or even killos. Killest searched the note for clues. On the back of the letter was a paper booklet. you, the reader, have stumbled upon the story of julsah. Mystic rumors of a future half-demon warrior has been released for solving. If you, the reader, have discovered this message, send it to otherworld immediately to the address of 449.223.898 to uncover thr truth of the story of julsah... killest was shocked to see that there will be another hero in the future who will follow in killest's footsteps. meanwhile in stonehaven, the strange creature has ventured into the stonehaven palace and discovered a young girl lying dead on the floor of the royal kitchens. The creature thought to itself, what could have caused this? King sigmar busted through the doors of the royal kitchens to find that his daughter, arorah, was lying dead on the floor. He shook his fist at the strange creature as it bowed down to king sigmar. King sigmar hadn't seen the spikes on the creature until it had bowed down. Sigmar said to the creature, oh dear, are my eyes decieving me, it's mesa lov from the light dimmension! The creature looked up and saw that killest had appeared behind king sigmar with a suprised look on his face. As killest walked into the royal kitchens to see that arorah had been killed, a waterfall of tears appeared from killest's eyes. Killest was very sad and disappointed to see that arorah had died. Killest says to king sigmar, what happened here!? Sigmar replied, i have no idea! Mesa lov stood up and read killest's mind, and he said to killest and king sigmar, gentlemen, you have been set up... Mesa lov picked up arorah's body and it had seemed to be made of pillow feathers. Killest shouted, its a trap!!! Killest ran out of the palace and teleported to killos 101. He then ran to the gateway to gg86.
« Last Edit: 07, May 2012, 05:19:41 by _people_ »
-- _people_ :)

Killest_is_awesome

« Reply #6 on: 07, May 2012, 04:59:34 »
I'll have to rewrite everything. besides, big letters never broke somebody's leg.

this is the way it was when i wrote it wordpad and it can't be changed unless i rewrite it

Or what if I lower the font size to 8pt?

So much logic in one post!!

I lowered the font size to prevent a waste of space

Wariotx

« Reply #7 on: 07, May 2012, 12:14:52 »
I lowered the font size to prevent a waste of space
:? don't get it...

clobber

« Reply #8 on: 07, May 2012, 12:27:30 »
Killest does not understand, I believe.
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